Baseball star involved in terrifying car crash hours after team's win
Cardinals star Masyn Winn involved in car crash -- hours after his game-winning hit against Mets
St. Louis Cardinals star Masyn Winn was involved in a car crash hours after he tallied his first game-winning hit Wednesday afternoon against the New York Mets. The 24-year-old shortstop was driving along Interstate 64 near St. Louis at the time of the single-car crash, the Cardinals said in a stat
“propel the Cardinals to a 2-1 win”
The verb 'propel' is an emotionally charged action word that dramatizes the hit's significance where a neutral alternative like 'won' or 'secured' exists.
Baseball star involved in terrifying car crash hours after team's win
St. Louis Cardinals player Masyn Winn was involved in a car crash just hours after handing his team victory over the New York Mets on Wednesday night. Winn was driving on Interstate 64, which runs alongside the team's Busch Stadium in downtown St. Louis, when he was involved in a single-car crash.
“terrifying car crash”
The adjective 'terrifying' is emotionally charged where a more neutral descriptor like 'serious' or omitting the modifier altogether would convey the same factual information.
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